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Please, put the phrase below which is more precise:
 
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::Lovelace developed the theory of the stability of electron and ion rings,<ref name="Lovelace1975">[https://journals.aps.org/prl/abstract/10.1103/PhysRevLett.35.162 "Low-frequency stability of Astron configurations"] R. V. E. Lovelace 1975, ''Physical Review Letters'' 35 (3), 162-164</ref> which has been used for the [[magnetic confinement fusion]] in plasma fusion experiments at Cornell.<ref name="Humphries1980">[https://iopscience.iop.org/article/10.1088/0029-5515/20/12/006/pdf "Intense pulsed ion beams for fusion applications"] S. Humphries Jr. 1980, Nuclear Fusion 20, 1549-1612, see p. 1589</ref>
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::Lovelace developed the theory of the stability of electron and ion rings,<ref name="Lovelace1975">[https://journals.aps.org/prl/abstract/10.1103/PhysRevLett.35.162 "Low-frequency stability of Astron configurations"] R. V. E. Lovelace 1975, ''Physical Review Letters'' 35 (3), 162-164</ref> which has been used for the [[magnetic confinement fusion]] in plasma fusion experiments at Cornell.<ref name="Humphries1980">[https://iopscience.iop.org/article/10.1088/0029-5515/20/12/006/pdf "Intense pulsed ion beams for fusion applications"] S. Humphries Jr. 1980, Nuclear Fusion 20, 1549-1612, see p. 1589,</ref>
   
 
2. Also, please substitute the old paragraph:
 
2. Also, please substitute the old paragraph:

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Add four "tilde"s at the end; they become your signature. T (talk) 14:08, 21 December 2020 (JST) T (talk) 14:08, 21 December 2020 (JST)

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26 February

Please, correct text in three places (numbered as 1, 2 and 3 below). New text has more references, it is more precise and more neutral. Also, I removed information which cannot be confirmed directly by references.

1. Instead of the phrase:

He also developed the theory of the stability of electron and ion rings,[1]Template:Better source needed which is used in current laboratory experiments on magnetic confinement fusion (for example at TAE Technologies in California).Template:Citation needed

Please, put the phrase below which is more precise:

Lovelace developed the theory of the stability of electron and ion rings,[1] which has been used for the magnetic confinement fusion in plasma fusion experiments at Cornell.[2]

2. Also, please substitute the old paragraph:

Lovelace proposed a new method of measuring magnetic fields,[3]Template:Better source needed developed a pioneering theory of intense ion beams in pulsed diodes, which are currently used in laboratories,[4]Template:Better source needed and proposed the theory of magnetic insulation, which is used in laboratories including at Sandia National Laboratories.[5]Template:Better source needed

with a new one (below).

Lovelace and collaborator (Prof. Sudan) developed a pioneering theory of intense ion beams in pulsed diodes,[4][2] and proposed the theory of magnetic insulation (in collaboration with E. Ott),[5] which are used in laboratories.[6]

3. Please, substitute the phrase:

He invented a trapping mechanism of spin-polarized neutral gas, which has been experimentally demonstrated.[7][8]Template:Better source needed

with a new one:

Lovelace and collaborators invented a trapping mechanism of spin-polarized neutral gas, which has been experimentally demonstrated.[7][9]


Marina (talk) 03:44, 17 February 2021 (JST)


References

  1. 1.0 1.1 "Low-frequency stability of astron configurations" R. V. E. Lovelace 1975, Physical Review Letters 35 (3), 162-164. Cite error: Invalid <ref> tag; name "Lovelace1975" defined multiple times with different content
  2. 2.0 2.1 "Intense pulsed ion beams for fusion applications" S. Humphries Jr. 1980, Nuclear Fusion 20, 1549-1612, see p. 1589,
  3. "System and method for sensing magnetic fields based on movement" Patent: United States Patent 6,639,403 A. Temnykh and R. V. E. Lovelace, October 28, 2003.
  4. 4.0 4.1 "Generation of intense ion beams in pulsed diodes". R. N. Sudan and R. V. Lovelace 1973, Physical Review Letters 31 (19), 1174. Cite error: Invalid <ref> tag; name "SudanLovelace1973" defined multiple times with different content
  5. 5.0 5.1 "Theory of magnetic insulation" R. V. Lovelace, E. Ott 1974, The Physics of Fluids 17 (6), 1263-1268. Cite error: Invalid <ref> tag; name "Lovelace1974" defined multiple times with different content
  6. Book: “Physics of Nonneutral Plasmas”, Ronald C. Davidson 2001, Imperial College Press and World Scientific Publishing Co. Pte. Ltd (see page 2 and Ref. 22 on page 8)
  7. 7.0 7.1 "Magnetic confinement of a neutral gas" R. V. E. Lovelace, C. Mehanian, T. J. Tommila, D. M. Lee 1985, Nature 318 (6041), 30-36. Cite error: Invalid <ref> tag; name "LovelaceEtAl1985" defined multiple times with different content
  8. "Storage rings for spin polarized hydrogen" D. Thompson, R. V. E. Lovelace, D. M. Lee 1989, Journal of the Optical Society of America, 611.
  9. “Nobel lecture: When atoms behave as waves: Bose-Einstein condensation and the atom laser” W. Ketterle 2002, Reviews of Modern Physics, 74, 1131-1151 (see page 1134)